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This idiot in my class wrote this about the group paper I did:
I do not want to cause any problems by commenting on this paper, but it is very apparent that the documentation is beyond extreme, it is the wildest thing I have ever seen. It seems as if the introduction of the paper is a list of quoted definitions straight out of the book. One after another you see stone cold facts with no natural opinion from the writers . A psychologist does not try to understand how the brain works, I am pretty sure he or she has a medical degree that back up the fact that they are certified doctors. It would be more exciting to reread my text book!
The second half of the paper has some opinion from the author, integrating his or hers own insight into the work, but you can tell that the person who put the papers together used their poor documentation skills to add to the mess of work.
My Response: This is because it is a professional scientific college paper, in which it is considered inappropriate to use the terms "I", "you", "we", "us", or "me". Such personalization is only acceptable for a paper in which you are giving personal account or personal opinion. In a research paper you have no professional experience with the subject and therefore unable to give an opinion, which is why its called research.
Excuse me? Poor documentation skills? Any sentence in which you state information that you, personally did not know before reading the source needs to be cited. They are not 'quotes'. Its stating that while I reworded the information in my own words, the information I used was not my own. *****************
Anyway..what's with that line "A psychologist does not try to understand how the brain works, I am pretty sure he or she has a medical degree that back up the fact that they are certified doctors." Does not try to understand how the brain works????? Are you kidding me? Is psychology!!
I will also note, that this idiot commented on the paper I posted in my last entry, stating that it was the "best introduction he'd read so far". I guess the fact that there is no sentence structure is a good quality!! AHHH he makes me so mad!
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